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| + | Feedback of Maxim to Daniela | ||
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| + | You used all W’s and used paragraphs witch make sense. | ||
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| + | You didn’t used short forms that’s good. | ||
| + | You didn't used adjectives. | ||
| + | But I like your text | ||
Aktuelle Version vom 14. Januar 2019, 12:45 Uhr
To do gymnastics
→ often, not in a Club, love it, in my bedroom, trampoline flips, sometimes with my friends, come down, stay fit
My favourite Hobby in my free time is to do gymnastics.
I love it, but I am not in a club. Often I do it after eating and in the evening . When its to cold outside I just do it in my room and not on the trampoline. Mostly I wear my comfortable leggings and a t-shirt.
I had start to do gymnastics many years ago, because my friend Maria had shown me some tricks and I really want to do it too.
Together we jumped on the bouncy pad and I resolve my first flip, it was a beautiful feeling.
I do gymnastics to come down and stay fit
Feedback of Maxim to Daniela
You used all W’s and used paragraphs witch make sense. You connect sometimes the sentence. You didn’t used short forms that’s good. You didn't used adjectives. But I like your text
