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We train in Bergbuir and, on Wednesday,Thursday and Friday is training. I play it because it make me fun and it’s good for the fitness. | We train in Bergbuir and, on Wednesday,Thursday and Friday is training. I play it because it make me fun and it’s good for the fitness. | ||
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Every year we have a tournament in a big Sports hall we play just for fun it’s a nice tournament last year I was 3rd and I play against player they 15 and 16. | Every year we have a tournament in a big Sports hall we play just for fun it’s a nice tournament last year I was 3rd and I play against player they 15 and 16. | ||
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| + | Hi, Patrick! You used paragraphs and the tense is right. You used also words to connect sentences. But you can use maybe more adjectives. Your grammar and your spelling was okay but I found mistakes. Your text is okay c: . | ||
Aktuelle Version vom 14. Januar 2019, 12:46 Uhr
Patrick
My favourite hobby
My favourite hobby is table-tennis. I play it with my friends and my couch couch us when we play again different teams.
We train in Bergbuir and, on Wednesday,Thursday and Friday is training. I play it because it make me fun and it’s good for the fitness.
Sometimes we play far away from Bergbuir for example in Aachen, Cologne it’s very cool but nobody plays table-tennis in the class except Nico.
Every year we have a tournament in a big Sports hall we play just for fun it’s a nice tournament last year I was 3rd and I play against player they 15 and 16.
Feedback von Sascha: 👌
Hi, Patrick! You used paragraphs and the tense is right. You used also words to connect sentences. But you can use maybe more adjectives. Your grammar and your spelling was okay but I found mistakes. Your text is okay c: .
