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Endrit

My birthday celebration

On Monday my family and I celebrated my birthday in Kosovo. Kosovo is a country with a beautiful countryside. My family and I go there every year in the summer holidays, because my grandpa, my grandmas, my aunts and my uncles live there.

First we ate a cake. My family sang ‘’Happy Birthday’’ for me. It was very nice from them. My mother also made a cake for later.

At 3 pm my cousin and I went at his home. We played football in his garden and listened to music with a speaker. It was very cool and I had a lot of fun.

Later all of my family and I went at the home from my grandma and my grandpa. My grandma made great food. We celebrated more than three hours. We played games and ate the cake. My family gave me presents too. I was very thankful.

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Does it have clear paragraphs? Yes, the text has clear paragrahps.

What is the topic sentence in each paragraph?

1. On Monday my family and I celebrated my birthday in Kosovo.

2. First we ate a cake.

3. At 3 pm my cousin and I went at his home.

4. Later all of my family and I went at the home from my grandma and my grandpa.

Do you get information about the 5 Ws? Yes: When: On his birthday. Where: In Kosovo. Why: He has brithday. What: He celebrate his birthday. Who: Endrit and his family.