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Last Saturday I visited Cologne with my family. | Last Saturday I visited Cologne with my family. | ||
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We went there because we want to go shopping. | We went there because we want to go shopping. | ||
| − | When we arrived, we went to the | + | When we arrived, we went to the Shopping centre. |
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My Mum and my Dad buy some Clothes. | My Mum and my Dad buy some Clothes. | ||
| − | Then we visited the Cathedral. | + | Then we visited the Cathedral. |
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We went into it and looked around. | We went into it and looked around. | ||
Later, we went to a restaurant and eat pizza. | Later, we went to a restaurant and eat pizza. | ||
| + | That was really delicious. | ||
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| + | '''FEEDBACK VON MAXI | ||
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| + | Does it have clear paragraphs? | ||
| + | Yes | ||
| + | What is the topic sentence in each paragraph? | ||
| + | 1: Last Saturday I visited Cologne with my family. | ||
| + | 2: When we arrived, we went to the Shopping centre. | ||
| + | 3: Then we visited the Cathedral. | ||
| + | 4: Later, we went to a restaurant and eat Pizza. | ||
| + | Do you get information about the 5 Ws? | ||
| + | When: Last Saturday | ||
| + | Where: Cologne | ||
| + | What: visit to cologne | ||
| + | who: Leo,his Mum and his dad. | ||
| + | Why: they go Shopping their | ||
Version vom 12. Dezember 2018, 08:19 Uhr
A trip to Cologne
Last Saturday I visited Cologne with my family. We went there because we want to go shopping.
When we arrived, we went to the Shopping centre.
My Mum and my Dad buy some Clothes.
Then we visited the Cathedral.
We went into it and looked around.
Later, we went to a restaurant and eat pizza.
That was really delicious.
FEEDBACK VON MAXI
Does it have clear paragraphs?
Yes
What is the topic sentence in each paragraph?
1: Last Saturday I visited Cologne with my family.
2: When we arrived, we went to the Shopping centre.
3: Then we visited the Cathedral.
4: Later, we went to a restaurant and eat Pizza.
Do you get information about the 5 Ws?
When: Last Saturday
Where: Cologne
What: visit to cologne
who: Leo,his Mum and his dad.
Why: they go Shopping their
