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Lucas

Dear diary,

Today was my schooltrip to the Snowdon National Park. We climbed to a waterfall with rocks and a lake. The lake was very nice. It streamed fresh and natural water downstreams the waterfall. At the end of the nationalpark we came to a beautiful countryside. Before we come to the beatiful countryside we acrossed a steel Mountain. There were many pretty cottages and very nice fields. There were beautiful animals like horses or sheep. I wanted to touch a tall horse. There were many friendly people too. After the Walking through the countryside we went by bus back to our hostel. At the ride I wondered what was the message inside the bottle. I wanted to read the message inside the waterbottle. The message inside the bottle was: ‘‘Hi Emily! Here is Dylan I’m so sorry that I made fun of you, because you can’t speak so well Welsh. Can we will be good friends, Emily?‘‘ When we arrived at the hostel we had delicious lunch. I ate fresh noodles with a tasty soup. After that we joined in special school competitions. At the evening I slept in my bed. Now I have good dreams, because maybe Dylan will be a good friend from me. What do you think, diary? Do you think today was a great experience? I think so, yes it was a brilliant experience.

See you soon

Your Emily

Emily

Dear diary,

Today was my classtrip to Snowdonia National Park. At the beginning I was really excited and really curious how it looks there. In the bus, all children were loud and already very excited too. Mrs Grant sayed that everyone must have a partner. She didn´t want to lose somebody. I was really sure that nobody wanted to be my partner. But just in this moment, Dylan asked me. I was really happy and we started to talking. Dylan is often in the Snowdonia National Park. Than Dylan said. „ If I had a kayak, I´d paddled right down from the top oft he waterfall to this pool.“ But Philip and I thinked that is a stupid idea. We started a test with a water bottle. Dylan wrote something on a piece of paper and put it into the bottle. He threw it into the waterfall. I tried to fish it out, but it was too far from the edge. I was really sad. But just then, Philip toke it out oft he water. But suddenly Dylan ran over to Philip, grabbed the bottle, and gave it to me. I was so surprised and thought about what can be in there. We were again on our way with Mrs Grant and the others. And on the way back to the bus, we all sang together the hammer song. I will never forget this classtrip. It was just beautiful. And I´m really looking forward to the note from Dylan. What can be in there?

See you soon,

Your Emily

Leni

Dear diary,

I was with my class at the National Park in Snowdon. When we arrived our teacher said to us that we should seek a partner to work with. My partner was Dylan whom I did not like so much in the beginning. He was already here often he knew his way around well and could show me a lot of nice things. For example, a very beautiful waterfall where you could paddle down with a kayak. We climbed stones to have a better view. Besides we had a great idea, I wanted to make a message in the bottle. Luckily Dylan had a paper and a pen where you could write something on it. I still had a bottle. As soon as the bottle was finished, she did not see anyone, so I quickly put her in the river very carefully. At the end of the day we sang a song together. It was the best class trip😊

See you soon

Emily 😊

Mara

Emily’s diary

Dear Diary, I have with my new class a trip to Snowdonia National park. At first we must take a partner. A Boy in my class laughed about me and he asked me who if he can be my Partner for the tour. I was very surprised, And I had no other choice to say yes. Then we started. My Partner and I went away from the group and we saw a little lake. My Partner asked me:,have you an pencil for me ?” Then he taked his bottle and wrote a later and he threw the bottle into the water. Then the bottle flow downstairs the lake. Later we went to our class back and I saw the bottle, I take the bottle it was very tricky because the not see it and I quickly put the bottle in my backpack but I did not have time to read the note bottle was very far away from the edge.I was hoping that Mrs. Grant did not see it, luckily she did not see it, luckily she did not saw it and I quickly put the bottle in my backpack but I did not have time to read the note.

So that was my Diary entry

Bye Emily😊

Jana

Dear diary,

Today my class travelled to Snowdonia National Park. Mrs Grant, my teacher, said that we should choose a partner. It was important to know where he or she is because she didn’t want to lose children. Then she told us when we stop for lunch and the tour started. Everybody hurried to find a partner. Suddenly somebody taped on my shoulder. It was Dylan and at first, I thought that he wants to make fun of me, but I was wrong. He wants to be my partner! He said it in Welsh, but I didn’t understand it, so he repeated it in English. He told me that he was here in the National Park for lots of times. It was very boring and later I didn’t listen anymore. I asked myself why he is my partner and we started walking. The boys climbed on the big rocks along the path, but Mrs Grant stopped them. After a few minutes we were at the waterfalls. It was so beautiful and it looked fairy tale. Dylan had a stupid idea and a boy called Philip told him that if he does that he would die. Then Dylan took a bottle and put a message in it. He ran at the top and dropped it into the water. It tried to fish it out, but it was too far away! Dylan ran over to Philip, pulled the bottle out of the water and gave it to me. Then Mrs Grant blew her whistle and the others were already on their way. I didn’t read the message and put it into my rucksack. I wondered what the message was. Dylan wanted to sing the hammer song and we all sang. It was so beautiful and I know this song because I always sing it with Dad. Then we were on the top of the mountain and it was beautiful view. I looked across the countryside and it was so amazing!

See you soon,

Emily

Alina L.:

Emily’s diary

Dear Diary,

Today I was with my class at the Snowdonia National Park. We arrived with a bus. When we was there, my teacher Mrs Grant said, that we have to choose a partner. I haven`t had a partner. Then came Dylan and ask me something of Welsh and I understood nothing. Later he asked me the same question of English. He asked me, if I already have a partner. I said not really and then he was my partner. He told me about his last trip, but I don`t listening. I asked myself ,,Why is he my partner?`` And then we started walking. Later we was at the waterfall. It was so beautiful. Dylan told me that if he had a kayak, he´d paddle from the top of the waterfall in the pool. A boy called Philip said it’s a stupid idea. Then Philip had a idea and Dylan wants to test them. He take a bottle, a paper and a pen and wrote a message in a bottle. He climbed on the top of the waterfall and put the bottle with the message in the water. When the bottle was by us he said the message is for me. But I can`t opened it, because Mrs Grant blew her whistle. There we sang the song ,, If I had a hammer``. The day was so nice and cool. This was the best class trip ever! But the full evening I asked myself what`s stands in the bottle.

Bye, Emily 😊

Alina

Hello Diary,

In the Morning we make a Class trip to Snowdon Natural park. First, we must choose a Partner. Dylan tapped me on the shoulder and say something in welsh. He wants to be my Partner, then we walk to the top of the Mountain Snowdon. When we are by the Waterfall Dylan say: If I had a kayak I’d paddle right down from the top to this pool. A group of boys laugh. Then Dylan want to run at the top and drop there a bottle with a letter in a bottle. Later Emily but the bottle with a stick out of the water. Then Mrs Grant took the bottle and they went up the mountain. Dylan has a good Idea! He say to all Let’s sing a song in English, because Emily know that language. At the End of the Day I have new friends and I have one question: What was the message in the bottle ?

Bye Emily🐱‍🏍