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Version vom 14. Januar 2019, 12:45 Uhr
Lena
My favorite hobby is riding!
For two or three years I made a riding course at a willow near my house. It makes me so happy!
After three weeks I went to Weyer. There is the big yard. My riding teacher displayed me, how I saddle and snaffle my horse. Then we ride out.
We ride mostly in the beautiful forest. Sometimes it is very cold but when the sun shines, I can ride on and on. It is a beautiful feeling when you gallop and feel the wind in your hair.
At the moment I ride Fridays but sometimes I can ride more times. It make still fun!
When we come back from a hack, we make the feed for the horses and muck out the dirty yard. It is indeed exhausting but it is a part of it.
Feedback to Lena of Luca:
You used paragraphs and you don't used short forms in your text. In your text you used the right tense. Often you used adjectives, for example "big yard". Your spelling is right. I think you don't connect sentences.
