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A trip to Cologne

Last Saturday I visited Cologne with my family. We went there because we want to go shopping.

When we arrived, we went to the Shopping centre. My Mum and my Dad buy some Clothes.

Then we visited the Cathedral. We went into it and looked around.

Later, we went to a restaurant and eat pizza. That was really delicious.

FEEDBACK VON MAXI Does it have clear paragraphs? Yes What is the topic sentence in each paragraph? 1: Last Saturday I visited Cologne with my family. 2: When we arrived, we went to the Shopping centre. 3: Then we visited the Cathedral. 4: Later, we went to a restaurant and eat Pizza. Do you get information about the 5 Ws? When: Last Saturday Where: Cologne What: visit to cologne who: Leo,his Mum and his dad. Why: they go Shopping their