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Luca

A nice day with Alex

On Friday, Alex and I went in a nice city. We wanted to watch a cool film. There were many films. We chose a very cool one.

First we went around the city. We ate there. It was a very big city. We also went in a big shopping mall. We bought some games. We had a lot fun in the city.

At 6 pm, the film started. It was about a man, who helped some people. The film was very nice. The man in the film had some fights with other peoples. It was very cool. At the end of the film, the man had a fight with an other man, who killed a friend of the man. The film ended at 9 pm

Later, we went home. I played some games with Alex. I played some games on our phones with Alex. We had of fun. We also ate something at home. At the and, Alex and I played some games on his PC. After that we went to bed.

Feedback from Nico

Does it have clear paragraphs?

Yes, it has clear paragraphs.

What is the topic sentence in each paragraph?

1.) On Friday, Alex and I went in a nice city.

2.) First we went around the city.

3.) At 6 pm, the film started.

4.) Later, we went home.

Do you get information about the 5 Ws?

Where? In a nice city.

When? On Friday.

Who? Alex and Luca.

Why? They wanted to watch a cool film.

What? A nice day in a nice city.