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Nico

Last summer holidays

Every year I fly with my family to a sea. Last year I and my family flew to a sea in Turkey. I swam very often in seas and it is very nice. My father liked it too, but my mum did not like it.

I drove there also jet ski. It made very fun, but I had an accident. I fell of the jet ski, but I could went on it again.

The hotel there was very nice. It had two pools, nice things to eat and drink and the hotel room was very nice and clean too.

I bought there also nice things. Many shops were near the hotel. I bought T-shirts, an ice cream and many other things. The people there were very friendly too.

Feedback von Leonard:

Your text is verry nice.

It is good that you use paragraphs. You wrote in the right tense.

Your text is also long enough and you had verry many Informations.

Your text have no misstakes.

You answere all W- Questions.