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Erik

Me and my friend Kai were in the Central Park. 50 meters away my best friend Jonathan, Tobi and Moritz were playing football. We went to them and we played along.

After 1 hour we lay down in thegrass and relaxed. We all heard the birds in the trees and the weatherwas beautiful too. We were sitting under a tree because it was very warm in the sun.

We all came for school because we were going on a trip through New York and the teachers said we had to see 2 sights. Our first one was Central Park and then we went to Brooklyn Bridge. It was very great and at 10 pm we went home again.

Me and Jonathan went back to Central Park the next day and fished there. We had a lot of fun. I even caught three fish. After about 4 hours Kai picked us up and we went to an American restaurant around 5 pm and ate a lot there.

We had a lot of fun and didn't want to leave. We always go by bus or subway, otherwise we wouldn't be fast enough. In the evening we flew back home by plane. I liked New York very much.

Jonathan

My Holidays in New York: In the autumn-holidays I want to go with my family (So my cousins and my parents will go with me) to New York. More precisely to Brooklyn, because Brooklyn offers attractions for every type of traveller. We will get there by plane, because it is really fast and I’m really interested in seeing New York.

So I want to go first early in the morning to the Brooklyn-Bridge. Early in the morning, because there aren’t so many cars and people It is a really great bridge, so I’m interested how high it really is. And maybe it is possible to fish there. The chances are very good, because it’s a really long river, the east river. After that I want to go to the Empire state building, but of course only when the weather is good, because… Well I want to see something and when I go already hundreds of meters high. In theafternoon it would be great if we find a deli, a hot dog-snack or something else what is really good, because I love good American food and I’m often very hungry after so much attractions. So I want to see also the Statue of Liberty, so we’ll get there by subway/underground and the ship.

So I'll we be of course more then one day in New York, but the days will often be like this structure; first the very great breakfast buffet. For example with bacon, scrambled eggs, sausages, toast etc. Then we get to a sight, or an attraction like Empire state building, central park, climbing park etc. by subway, bus or walk ahead. After that in the afternoon we’ll have lunch like a deli with bagels, a restaurant, a snack or something else. After that we’ll go for example to a walk through the forest and after that we’ll go for dinner in an Italian Restaurant or eat dinner in the Hotel.