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Version vom 12. Dezember 2018, 09:19 Uhr
Daniela
My walk to an island seite 38 no 2 10.11.18
In the summer holidays in Cuxhaven
I walked to the island Neuwerk.
Its an 12 km walk thought a mudflads.
The oldest group slept in a barn on the island.
Because the People there invite us every year to sleep one night there.
The night sky on Neuwerk was beautiful and
you can saw many stars and falling stars.
We went back by ship at
eight o’clock and it was sunset.
At home we drove Katcar
and jump on the bouncy
Feedback Timo: There are one fullstop mising (At the ending). You have the 5 Ws: Where, Who, What, Why, When. You have wrote clear paragraphs and you have a Topic sentences in each paragraph. That was good.
