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== Andreas == | == Andreas == | ||
| − | '''<u>By the | + | '''<u>By the lake</u>''' |
| − | At the summer holidays my friend and I drove to a | + | At the summer holidays my friend and I drove to a lake. |
| − | When we were there, it was | + | When we were there, it was 3 pm. So we went down the path. |
| − | + | Then we played volleyball and I won. After that we played football in the sand and my friend won the football match. | |
| − | My friend and I wanted to swim and | + | My friend and I wanted to swim and then we went in the water. When we swam my friend Luke saw a snake at the beach and he screamed. So we ran out of the water and I looked at the snake, because I like snakes, but my friend Luke didn’t like snakes. I saw the snake and I said to my friend that this was not a dangerous snake. I took the snake and put it in the small forest next to the beach. |
| − | When we drove home I told | + | When we drove home, I told my mum about this,also my dad and my brother and they were happy that I helped the snake to get into the forest. |
I think the snake was also happy. | I think the snake was also happy. | ||
Version vom 12. Dezember 2018, 08:29 Uhr
Andreas
By the lake
At the summer holidays my friend and I drove to a lake. When we were there, it was 3 pm. So we went down the path.
Then we played volleyball and I won. After that we played football in the sand and my friend won the football match.
My friend and I wanted to swim and then we went in the water. When we swam my friend Luke saw a snake at the beach and he screamed. So we ran out of the water and I looked at the snake, because I like snakes, but my friend Luke didn’t like snakes. I saw the snake and I said to my friend that this was not a dangerous snake. I took the snake and put it in the small forest next to the beach.
When we drove home, I told my mum about this,also my dad and my brother and they were happy that I helped the snake to get into the forest. I think the snake was also happy.
Does it have clear paragraphs? Yes it have clear Paragraph.
What is the topic sentence in each paragraph? At the summer holidays my friend and I drove to a sea.
Do you get information about the 5 Ws? No he didn't give Information.
Feedback I found the Text very interessing and it have some misstakes but the text is okay
