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| − | '''<u>By the | + | '''<u>By the lake</u>''' |
| − | + | During the summer holidays my friend and I drove to a lake. | |
| − | When we were there, it was | + | When we were there, it was 3 pm. So we went down the path. |
| + | Then we played volleyball and I won. After that we played football in the sand and my friend won the football match. | ||
| − | + | My friend and I wanted to swim and then we went in the water. When we swam my friend Luke saw a snake at the beach and he screamed. So we ran out of the water and I looked at the snake, because I like snakes, but my friend Luke didn’t like snakes. I saw the snake and I said to my friend that this was not a dangerous snake. I took the snake and put it in the small forest next to the beach. | |
| − | + | When we drove home, I told my mum about this,also my dad and my brother and they were happy that I helped the snake to get into the forest. | |
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| − | When we drove home I told | + | |
I think the snake was also happy. | I think the snake was also happy. | ||
| − | '''Does it have clear paragraphs? ''' Yes it | + | '''Does it have clear paragraphs? ''' Yes, it has clear paragraphs. |
| − | '''What is the topic sentence in each paragraph?''' At the summer holidays | + | '''What is the topic sentence in each paragraph?''' At the summer holidays; My friend and I drove to a sea; When we |
| − | '''Do you get information about the 5 Ws? ''' | + | '''Do you get information about the 5 Ws? ''' Yes, that's okay. |
| − | '''Feedback''' I found the | + | '''Feedback''' I found the text very interessing and it has some mistakes but the text is okay. |
Aktuelle Version vom 12. Dezember 2018, 08:32 Uhr
Andreas
By the lake
During the summer holidays my friend and I drove to a lake. When we were there, it was 3 pm. So we went down the path. Then we played volleyball and I won. After that we played football in the sand and my friend won the football match.
My friend and I wanted to swim and then we went in the water. When we swam my friend Luke saw a snake at the beach and he screamed. So we ran out of the water and I looked at the snake, because I like snakes, but my friend Luke didn’t like snakes. I saw the snake and I said to my friend that this was not a dangerous snake. I took the snake and put it in the small forest next to the beach.
When we drove home, I told my mum about this,also my dad and my brother and they were happy that I helped the snake to get into the forest. I think the snake was also happy.
Does it have clear paragraphs? Yes, it has clear paragraphs.
What is the topic sentence in each paragraph? At the summer holidays; My friend and I drove to a sea; When we
Do you get information about the 5 Ws? Yes, that's okay.
Feedback I found the text very interessing and it has some mistakes but the text is okay.
