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In the past I played Clanwars in Minecraft with online “friends”. | In the past I played Clanwars in Minecraft with online “friends”. | ||
| − | That was a nice time. I | + | That was a nice time. I don't play in all my free time, that’s not good. |
Playing computer games makes a lot of fun. | Playing computer games makes a lot of fun. | ||
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| + | I really like your text, because you used paragraphs, but you shout use connecting words and more adjectifs. I also like it, that you have a structure and the right tense. And you used almost the Five "W's" in your text. Good job! | ||
Aktuelle Version vom 14. Januar 2019, 12:41 Uhr
Luca
My favourite free time activity
In my free time I like to play games on my computer.
I often play games with my friends and we talk on a discord server and sometimes on a buggy voice chat.
My favourite game is Fortnite, but I also like and play Minecraft, Red Dead Redemption and CsGo.
I play Fortnite, Red Dead Redemption on the PC with a controller.
The other games I play with a mouse and keyboard.
Sometimes when no friends are online, I play alone.
If a friend is online I often play with him. Often I play with my neighbour Tom and friends of him.
In the past I played Clanwars in Minecraft with online “friends”.
That was a nice time. I don't play in all my free time, that’s not good.
Playing computer games makes a lot of fun.
Feedback by Emilie:
I really like your text, because you used paragraphs, but you shout use connecting words and more adjectifs. I also like it, that you have a structure and the right tense. And you used almost the Five "W's" in your text. Good job!
