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| − | My Hobby is play the drums. I went every Tuesday 16:55 to | + | My Hobby is play the drums. I went every Tuesday 16:55 to 17:20 to the drum lesson. My teacher is Uwe reetz. I play the drums since 3 years. I learned every day for the drum lesson, ever 15-30 min. I go to Golbach for the lesson. By the lesson I play the notes out the notebock. Uwe look than is everything be right. After the drum lesson we make the guitar lesson. |
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Your text is very good and you used the five W questions. It‘s perfect | Your text is very good and you used the five W questions. It‘s perfect | ||
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| + | But you can write a little bit more. | ||
You don‘t have paragraphs and you don‘t used words like ‘‘and‘‘ or ‘‘but‘‘. | You don‘t have paragraphs and you don‘t used words like ‘‘and‘‘ or ‘‘but‘‘. | ||
But altogether, your text is very good.👍🏻 | But altogether, your text is very good.👍🏻 | ||
Aktuelle Version vom 14. Januar 2019, 12:45 Uhr
My Hobby
My Hobby is play the drums. I went every Tuesday 16:55 to 17:20 to the drum lesson. My teacher is Uwe reetz. I play the drums since 3 years. I learned every day for the drum lesson, ever 15-30 min. I go to Golbach for the lesson. By the lesson I play the notes out the notebock. Uwe look than is everything be right. After the drum lesson we make the guitar lesson.
Feedback von Meike für Maxi
Your text is very good and you used the five W questions. It‘s perfect
But you can write a little bit more.
You don‘t have paragraphs and you don‘t used words like ‘‘and‘‘ or ‘‘but‘‘.
But altogether, your text is very good.👍🏻
