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Aktuelle Version vom 12. Dezember 2018, 08:31 Uhr
Ina
A nice Day
Yesterday my ant and I drove with the train to cologne.
First we went to the Christmas market, and eat a crépe. Then we we looked a show dirty dancing it was a cool show the people dancing and the spectators acclaimed.
Today we looked football in Gladbach, we waked up at 10 clock .
First we search the right entry and then we looked a good football mach
Daniela Does it have clear paragraphs? Yes, it have
What is the topic sentence in each paragraph? Yesterday my ant and I drove with the train to cologne. First we went to the Christmas market, and eat a crépe. Today we looked football in Gladbach, we waked up at 10 Clock.First we search the right entry and then we looked a good football match.
Do you get information about the 5 Ws?
Yes When Yesterday, Today What You went to a Chrismas market, looked a Show and a Football match Why Who Your ant and you Where On a Chrismas market, stadium
Feedback from Xenia
Does it have clear paragraphs?
Yes you have clear paragraphs in your text.
What is the topic sentence in each paragraph?
1. paragraph: Yesterday my aunt and I drove with the train to cologne.
2. paragraph: Today we looked a football match in Gladbach, we waked up at 10 clock.
Do you get information about the 5 Ws?
When?: Yesterday and Today
Where?: In cologne and Gladbach
What?: a Christmas market and a football match
Who?: Ina and her aunt
But you have forgot "why?" you and your aunt drove to cologne.
