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Alex

My favourite free time activity

- Often play computer games with friends

- Play different games

- Makes fun

- Don't play the full time

My favourite free time activity is playing computer games with my friends. I play games at home. I often play games with my friends. It makes a lot of fun.

I often play Fortnite. It's a cool game. But I also play other games like Minecraft or Call of Duty Black Ops 4. I don't play Minecraft very much.

I play games with my keyboard and my mouse. Sometimes I play with my controller.

When we play, my friends and I are on a Discord server, so we can talk and chat. In the past, we was on a Teamspeak server. We also can talk in the ingame chats.

Not all my friends have games that I have, so I sometimes play alone. I also play alone, when my friends are not online. But not every time.

Often, I play with my online friend. He is very cool.

I don't play computer games the full time. That would not be good. Playing computer games makes a lot of fun.

Feedback by Anna:

I really like your text, because you use paragraphs. But you should add more adjectives and words to connect two or more sentenses, which make the text interesting to read. You answer the five W's (Who/Where/Why/What/When), so good Job! 😃