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Aktuelle Version vom 14. Januar 2019, 12:43 Uhr
Sascha
My favourite hobby…
My favourite hobby is football. Every Monday and Friday I go to the football field in Kall. We practise together about one and half hours. We begin at 5pm.
First we run around the field for the warm up. Then we do often a strech-exercise or a other exercises (goal shoot exercise, to can handle the ball well, etc…) . We do this often for a football match or a compatition. Football can be very fun.
After the training my dad pick me up in a car. When I am at home, I take always a shower. Then I eat something for the dinner. At the end of the day I‘m ready for the next day and I go to sleep.
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