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Version vom 12. Dezember 2018, 09:25 Uhr
Sascha
My birthday in Russia
Last Year, my family and I celebrated my birthday in Russia. We went to Russia, because my parents comes out there and it was the summer holidays. There live my aunts, cousins and my grandparents.
We did lot of things. First we swam in a lake. It was very cold there! Then we played togheter football. I was with my dad in a team versus my mum and my brother. Of course my dad and I won this game. Too easy!
In the evening we ate a yummy cake with a chocolate sauce. Hmmm.. delicious!
Later we celebrated my birthday with the presents. I became a new playstation 4 game! That was really nice!
Feedback from Ina to Sascha
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What is the topic sentence in each paragraph?
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When -> Last year
what -> they celebrait her Birthday and visited his family
why -> Because they visited his family
who -> Sascha's Family
where -> in Russia
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