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Version vom 14. Januar 2019, 12:43 Uhr
Leonard
My favourite hobby
Football is my favourite hobby.
I often play it in my free time at a football pitch.
I’m in a football club with my friends.
At some days we had a football match and sometimes we win.
Every week on Monday and Wednesday we had training.
At training we practise our mistakes that we had in a match.
At the end of the training we make a cool match.
Sometimes we had nice Tournaments where we play against other teams.
When the Weather is really bad, we play in a big sports hall.
Feedback von Ina für Leonard
Your text is actually quite good but I would have told a little more about where and how you played there. But your Grammer is good and your spelling was good too.👍
