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Aktuelle Version vom 12. Dezember 2018, 08:16 Uhr
Lena
A day in the winter Wonderland
Last weekend I went to a frozen lake. It was cold and there was snow on the trees. Luckily I weared warm clothes.
First, I dressed on my skates.
When I finished, I carefully went to the lake. At first it was very difficult because I slipped a lot, but after 30 minutes I was able to walk on the ice. After a bit of training, I managed to make a quick turn.
In the afternoon I was very tired and hungry. I took off my skates and took a big picnic out of my backpack. When I was strengthened, I went home.
It was a very funny and instructive day!
Feedback von Emilie
Does it have clear paragraphs?
Yes, you used clear paragraphs. I can see a clear structure and where a new Paragraph begins.
What is the topic sentence in each paragraph?
1. Last Weekend I went to a frozen lake.
2. First, I dressed on my skates.
3. When I finished, I carefully went to the lake.
4. In the afternoon I was very tired and hungry
5. It was a very funny and intructive day!
Do you get information about the 5 Ws?
What?:
A day in the winter Wonderland
Where?:
At a frozen lake.
When?:
Last Weekend
Why?:
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Who?: Lena
