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Luca

My favourite free time activity

In my free time I like to play games on my computer.

I often play games with my friends and we talk on a discord server and sometimes on a buggy voice chat.

My favourite game is Fortnite, but I also like and play Minecraft, Red Dead Redemption and CsGo.

I play Fortnite, Red Dead Redemption on the PC with a controller.

The other games I play with a mouse and keyboard.

Sometimes when no friends are online, I play alone.

If a friend is online I often play with him. Often I play with my neighbour Tom and friends of him.

In the past I played Clanwars in Minecraft with online “friends”.

That was a nice time. I don't play in all my free time, that’s not good.

Playing computer games makes a lot of fun.

Feedback by Emilie:

I really like your text, because you used paragraphs, but you shout use connecting words and more adjectifs. I also like it, that you have a structure and the right tense. Good job!