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Meike

The Holidays in Belgien.

My family and me was in the summer holidays at Belgien, we wanted make a nice and great holiday.

At the first of our Holiday we drive with our car and our caravan to a campsite. Then we drive with our bikes to the see. It was very close to the campsite and we can look the sunset. It was so beautiful.

At lunchtime on our third day, we went to eat in the city, there are so many peoples, who enjoyed the weather.

When we were again at the campsite, my brother and me drove with our hoverboards. It is a lot of fun.😃

At the last day of the holidays, the weather was very very good and we went to the beach and swam in the sea. The water was warm and we had a lot of fun. The best part was, that we saw a real seal in the water and she was really close to us.

At the afternoon, my little cousin came to the beach too and than we caught little fishes. It was a little bit disgustig, but it was funny too.

When it was evening, we drove back to home.

It was a nice holiday.

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Does it have clear paragraphs? Yes, there are many paragraphs in this text.

What is the topic sentence in each paragraph? My family and me was in the summer holidays at Belgien, we wanted make a nice and great holiday. At the first of our Holiday we drive with our car and our caravan to a campsite. At lunchtime on our third day, we went to eat in the city, there are so many peoples, who enjoyed the weather. When we were again at the campsite, my brother and me drove with our hoverboards. At the last day of the holidays, the weather was very very good and we went to the beach and swam in the sea. At the afternoon, my little cousin came to the beach too and than we caught little fishes.

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When: In the summer Holidays

Where: At Belgian

What: The visited the beach, they drive with the bikesdrive with the haverboards on the campside, went in the city and eat there, they swam in the sea, they saw a really seals and they catch little fishes

Who: The Family from Meike

Why: Because Meike's family went on holidays