Achtung:

Dieses Wiki, das alte(!) Projektwiki (projektwiki.zum.de)
wird demnächst gelöscht.

Bitte sichere Deine Inhalte zeitnah,
wenn Du sie weiter verwenden möchtest.


Gerne kannst Du natürlich weiterarbeiten

im neuen Projektwiki (projekte.zum.de).

18

Aus Projektwiki - ein Wiki mit Schülern für Schüler.
Wechseln zu: Navigation, Suche

Inhaltsverzeichnis

Ina

A nice Day


Yesterday my ant and I drove with the train to cologne.

First we went to the Christmas market, and eat a crépe. Then we we looked a show dirty dancing it was a cool show the people dancing and the spectators acclaimed.

Today we looked football in Gladbach, we waked up at 10 clock .

First we search the right entry and then we looked a good football mach


Daniela Does it have clear paragraphs? Yes, it have

What is the topic sentence in each paragraph? Yesterday my ant and I drove with the train to cologne. First we went to the Christmas market, and eat a crépe. Today we looked football in Gladbach, we waked up at 10 Clock.First we search the right entry and then we looked a good football match.


Do you get information about the 5 Ws?

Yes When Yesterday, Today What You went to a Chrismas market, looked a Show and a Football match Why Who Your ant and you Where On a Chrismas market, stadium



Feedback from Xenia

Does it have clear paragraphs?

Yes you have clear paragraphs in your text.

What is the topic sentence in each paragraph?

1. paragraph: Yesterday my aunt and I drove with the train to cologne.

2. paragraph: Today we looked a football match in Gladbach, we waked up at 10 clock.

Do you get information about the 5 Ws?

When?: Yesterday and Today

Where?: In cologne and Gladbach

What?: a Christmas market and a football match

Who?: Ina and her aunt

But you have forgot "why?" you and your aunt drove to cologne.