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I can make good and long twists and I can make a cartwheel on my roller skates. ❤I love it.❤ | I can make good and long twists and I can make a cartwheel on my roller skates. ❤I love it.❤ | ||
In the winter when the weather is not good, we go to skating rink because it is like roller skating just on the ice.⛸ | In the winter when the weather is not good, we go to skating rink because it is like roller skating just on the ice.⛸ | ||
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Aktuelle Version vom 14. Januar 2019, 13:44 Uhr
My favourite hobby in my free time
My favourite hobby what I do in my free time is skate with my roller skates.
They are light green with a little bit pink and white. They are looking very beautiful.
When the weather is good, I make after the school my home works and then I go outside and skate. Often my best friend and I skate together.
I skate because it makes fun. Often I also listen to music and to do dances on the roller skates.
When I skate with my best friend Theresa we have lot of fun and we skate very very fast. Or we drive down a steep mountain and have a lot of fun.😃
Sometimes I drive with my brother but not with roller skates but with inline skates.
I can make good and long twists and I can make a cartwheel on my roller skates. ❤I love it.❤
In the winter when the weather is not good, we go to skating rink because it is like roller skating just on the ice.⛸
Feedback from Timo
You have answer the 5 W´s that was good, but you don´t use paragraphs!!!
You have use adjectives, but somethings to many (very very).
You have use connecting words, but you have missspelling some words.
Your text is complet.
