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My favourite hobby in my free time

My favourite hobby what I do in my free time is skate with my roller skates. They are light green with a little bit pink and white. They are looking very beautiful. When the weather is good, I make after the school my home works and then I go outside and skate. Often my best friend and I skate together. I skate because it makes fun. Often I also listen to music and to do dances on the roller skates. When I skate with my best friend Theresa we have lot of fun and we skate very very fast. Or we drive down a steep mountain and have a lot of fun.😃 Sometimes I drive with my brother but not with roller skates but with inline skates. I can make good and long twists and I can make a cartwheel on my roller skates. ❤I love it.❤ In the winter when the weather is not good, we go to skating rink because it is like roller skating just on the ice.⛸

Feedback from Timo

You have answer the 5 W´s that was good, but you don´t use paragraphs!!! You have use adjectives, but somethings to many (very very). You have use connecting words, but you have missspelling some words. Your text is complet.