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Maxim

When Monday

What I sleep to much and my Parents go to the London eye

Who my parents and me.

Where In London (hotel)

Why I was in another room.

I sleep to much

In the morning I was in my hotel room and my Alarm clock ringing and I don’t hear it. And my Parents tough that’s I was out of my room and I went with my Brother to the London eye. I was in my room, I woke up and I see on my phone that’s 13 o’clock is. So I stand up brushed my teeth. I went out side and I called my Mother and I ask: ,, were are you? I want to go to the London eye.’’ She said: ,, I am at the London eye so hurry up to get here that’s we can drive together.’’ So I run to the London eye and I have done it I was so fast that I get to the London eye and I drive with my Parents.

Andreas

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