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Emilie

I want to talk about my favourite hobby. It‘s riding.

I go every wednesday to the equestrian farm opposite to my house (for 10 years) , to have there my riding lesson.

First I have to get my horse ready. That means I have to clean my horse with my brushes for the it. After that I have to saddle and to snaffle it. So I don‘t hurt myself, I have to wear a helm. Then the riding lesson starts. I often ride on the riding arena, but sometimes ( often in the summer when it is warm) I go for a ride with my horse. The riding lesson goes on for one hour.

After the lesson I have to furnish the horse. I give them then always some water and hay. If I‘m ready with this, I often clear then the dung away and give all horses on the whole equestrian farm something to eat and to drink. Then I‘m ready with almost and I go back at home. But I go often two or three days in the week to the horses for helping there.

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