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Fiona

When I go swimming

Every week Wednesday I go swimming and sometimes I swimming at Monday. I swimming from 6pm to 7:30pm in the match- group. We do every week another stroke. It´s very nice but sometimes its very hard. We swim crawl, breast and swim dolphin. Dolphin is the heaviest stroke. I swim since I was five. Before the training we must do on the pool edge fitness. I found the fitness stupid. But it´s very funny. And found new friends. And before the Christmas holidays we play and we bring biscuits and more with and we have a Christmas celebration it´s very nice before the summer holidays we play too ,but we haven´t biscuits.

Feedback from Patrick to Fiona

I find your text is good, you ask all 5 W. questions, sometimes you do a mistake but all in all, it's a good text.