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Ben
My favourite hobby
Every year I and my family go to Austria in Ski Amade to go skiing. We go there in spring and winter because that is very funny.
We go skiing in Flachau, Wagrain, Schladming and Zauchensee, that make very fun. It is for me the second home. Austria is so beautiful. The food is very delicious. I love Austria so much. We lend the ski and go by car to Ski amade.
This is my favourite hobby and I love it so much. I go there since 10 years, I would stay there if I could. Try skiing too.
Feedback from Luis for Ben
Your text is very nice. You used paragraphs and made no mistakes. You used only one tense, that was good 👍. You didn't use so much linking words, but that's ok. You used no short forms and some good adjectives. Your text is really nice!👌
