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Ina

                                                                          Football

My favourite Hobby is football. I play football because my father played it in his youth too and is now on the board of the Kaller Sc. My brother plays football too. I shot my first ball with four and played with six in my first football team. My first football team was Golbach. In the F-juvenile I changed to the Kaller sc. In C youth I had to switch because I was too old and I changed to Kommern. But I didn't play there for long because I got myself at the heel and then I didn’t play for a three-quarter of a year. When I was healthy again, I played in Kall again. But then I got too old again, so I had to change again. Finally, I play in Scheven, Scheven, like all other teams besides commers, is also a boys club, But that's not bad. I’m the only one girl in the Team, but that don’t alters something that I like football. But I don't just play in Scheven. On a day when I had training with Scheven, the coach came from Kommers and asked me if I wanted to play in his girl Team in the Mittelreihnliga. It would be like that I could play in two teams. So that I would get a second game permission to play in Kommern and in Scheven.

In addition to commers and Scheven, I also play in the base camp in Verrnich, which is luckily only once every month.In summary, I play in three football teams so said. On Monday I play from 6pm to 7:30pm in verrnich for the base camp on Tuesday I play from 6pm to 7:30pm in Scheven on Wednesday I play from 3:30pm to 5pm in Kommern On Friday I play from 6pm to 7:30pm Over the weekend, I often have matches. This is my hobby, even though some people say football is not for girls but I don't see it that way. And I hope that many girls are allowed to play football as it is not a bad thing.

Feedback from Ben to Ina: I think your Text is very good, but you don´t use short forms (I´m = I am). The content is very nice and interesting. You can use more paragraphs. Read your text after again because there, because you have some mistakes. Altogether is your text very nice.