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Endrit

A holiday in Kosovo

Last summer holiday, I was in Kosovo with my family for 1 week.

On Monday we visited my grandmas and my grandpa. They were surprised. After the visit at my grandmas and my grandpa, we visited my uncles and my aunts. They were surprised too. Evenings we were hungry and ate something.

On Wednesday my dad and I were at the old home from my dad. It was very beautiful there. There were many big hills and two or three long lakes. We saw two snakes there. They were small, but they looked very dangerous. The day was very cool.

One day later my family and I went to a small beach. It looks very beautiful there. I swam a lot and I played football with by brother. Afternoons I walked through the big city with my brother. We ate some yummy food. Then we drove very fast bumper cars. I had a lot of fun.

Feedback from Nico for Endrit:

Your text is very nice. It has paragraphs, many adjectives and words which connect two sentences. You doesn’t use short forms. That is good too. You have a mistake in the second paragraph. It calls “At evenings”. And you have a mistake in your last paragraph too. It calls “It looked..”.