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Tabea

Write a text about my hobby

My favourite hobby is riding because it is funny. Riding is my life since I was five years old. I go riding in Kall on a little court, there is a stable where Shadow stands. I usually visit Shadow on the weekend, in the morning Thomas and Ela pick me up and we drive together to Shadow. Then we make Shadow and Lizzy ready for the trip. Me and Ela ride then two or three hours through the forest. In the afternoon we drive home, Thomas and Ela come in and drink coffee with my parents. One hour later they go home and me and my parents play a game or watch tv.

Feedback für Tabea:

You take sometimes pharagraphs.

You have noticed the 5 W's.

You have tell over Shadow. You tell that you Shadow love and that you 8 years ago went to ride.

You also wrote that riding your life is.

You take words like then,and,or …

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