Englisch

6/11/2018

A trip to Italy. My Family and I was in the Holiday in Italy. we lived in a Caravan on the Camping place: Bella Italia. It was very cool because, there was a very nice Football field and a nice swimmimg pool. Every day I was on the Football field with lots of People. It was very hot but it was very cool too. At 10 am to 12am was a Football competition. It was every day. I often win the Competition with my Team because, we was very good. I played every day from 10 am to 10 pm. Sometimes I was in the swimmimg pool because it was to hot for Play Football. In the last week we went in the City and we go Shopping on the market. It was not so good because, it was boring. But I bought nice Things for me. It was a big market too. Every day in the evening there was a very nice Disco for Kids. It was funny and interresting. And there was an funny theatre with very very funny adults. I think that Italy is an very nice Country because, there are very expensive Things what you can do. I think on the next year, I certainly drive with my Family to Italy.

Feedback von Jona: The big words are wrong. positive: You wrote exciting and grammatically you did almost everything right. You have good paragraphs and the topic sentence are very good. You wrote convincing and it sounds as you were ever there. negative: You make little grammatically mistakes and observe the spelling. Cool Text. 😎😉