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+ | 1. Last weekend my family and I drave to Austria to have a Holiday there. | ||
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+ | 3. When we went to a cave we saw some young deer. | ||
+ | 4. When we went back to the hostel we almost were feeling cold. | ||
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+ | '''What:''' | ||
+ | A day in forest. | ||
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+ | At Austria | ||
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+ | Last Weekend. | ||
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+ | Emilie and her family |
Aktuelle Version vom 12. Dezember 2018, 08:18 Uhr
Emilie
Ideas: · a walk trough a forest in the mountains with my whole Family · saw very much animals · a guide showed us some intersting trees · heared some birds singing · had a great view from the hills After the walk: · its snowed · make a snowballfight · built a snowman · at the end we drank some tea or cocao and ate some biscuites
A day in a forest
Last weekend my family and I drave to Austria to have a holiday there.
When we arrived we settle in our rooms . Then we went to the breakfast room and ate some delicious things. After that, we went out, because my parnets want to see a famous forest. On hour we had a nice tour with our guide. We saw some intersting birds, which were singing very beautiful.
When we went to a cave we saw some young deer. We also saw foxes, hedgehogs, squirrels and beavers. Very nice!
After the long walk we were on the mountains. From there we had a great view. So we saw our hostel and a famous lake. Suddenly it begans to snow! That was the first time in this year! That‘s why we did a snowballfight with almost. But after that I was building a snowman.
When we went back to the hostel we almost were feeling cold. When we were inside the hostel we drank cocao and cups of tea, while we ate our biscuites.
Feedback von Lena
Does it have clear paragraphs?
You have clear paragraphs and I can see where a new paragraph starts.
What is the topic sentence in each paragraph?
1. Last weekend my family and I drave to Austria to have a Holiday there. 2. When we arrived we settle in our rooms. 3. When we went to a cave we saw some young deer. 4. When we went back to the hostel we almost were feeling cold.
Do you get information about the 5 Ws?
What:
A day in forest.
Where: At Austria
When: Last Weekend.
Why: Holiday
Who: Emilie and her family